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Scryed Posted 19 years ago
can someone help me to find the errors within the paragraph below and correct them? Thank you!
The policy of ABC Group is empowered commit the challenge in professionalism by providing quality
and reliable, logistics service. Customers Satisfaction is the mission of ABC for the best suit ofyour
needs and expectation. We are proud of professional team of ABC work to achieve close collaboration
air of clients and overseas partners.
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need some help correcting the errors on a business introduction
can someone help me to find the errors within the paragraph below and correct them? Thank you!
The policy of ABC Group is empowered commit the challenge in professionalism by providing quality
and reliable, logistics service. Customers Satisfaction is the mission of ABC for the best suit ofyour
needs and expectation. We are proud of professional team of ABC work to achieve close collaboration
air of clients and overseas partners.
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Your writing is usually much better than this Scryed - what happened? Try using less jargon and more of your normal language.
- Your writing is usually much better than this Scryed - what happened?
- Try using less jargon and more of your normal language.
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Your writing is usually much better than this Scryed - what happened?
Try using less jargon and more of your normal language.
Try using less jargon and more of your normal language.
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I'm not the one who wrote the passage. In fact, I'm not even sure who wrote it (possibly it's either one of my bosses or superiors). If I'm going to correct this, I better be sure it's right or I might get into trouble.
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my attempt to impove it.
The policy of ABC is to commit the challenge in professionalism by providing quality and reliable logistics service. Customers Satisfaction is our mission and we will try our best to suit your needs and expectation. Our professional employees will form close collaboration with clients and overseas partners to form a long term relationship.
this is an atte
The policy of ABC is to commit the challenge in professionalism by providing quality and reliable logistics service. Customers Satisfaction is our mission and we will try our best to suit your needs and expectation. Our professional employees will form close collaboration with clients and overseas partners to form a long term relationship.
this is an atte
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