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Scryed Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

need some further help with the paragraph below

need some help with the paragraph below. Please check to see if there's any grammer mistakes and which one is the better one of the two? And if possible, please show me a improve paragraph with the same information. Thank you very much!

Our mission is to provide customers with reliable, flexible and cost effective solution to all their logistics needs. We take great pride and responsibility to be able to deliver your goods on time and ensure they are in unscratched.



Our mission is to provide customers with reliable, flexible and cost effective solution to all their logistics needs. We take great pride and responsibility to deliver your goods on time and ensure they are in unscratched.
  

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BUMP, will need help on fixing this paragraph. Am I posting in the wrong section?

  • BUMP, will need help on fixing this paragraph.
  • Am I posting in the wrong section?
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BUMP, will need help on fixing this paragraph.

Am I posting in the wrong section?
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Our mission is to provide customers with reliable, flexible and cost effective solutions to all their logistics needs. We take great pride and responsibility to be able in being able to deliver your goods on time and in ensuring that they are in unscratched arrive unda
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Thank you Feebs

just one minor question, is there a need to take out the blue text? Thanks again!

Our mission is to provide customers with reliable, flexible and cost effective solutions to all their logistics needs. We take great pride and responsibility to be able in being able to deliver your goods on time
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Yes - I meant to delete them. Sorry to confuse you.

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