Need review IELTS GT Writing Task 2

Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?

Its broadly acknowledged that pursuit of happiness is ultimate objective of humans. Most people think it is important to have wealth for their pleasure and peaceful life. However, only large sum of capital is not enough as there are some other essentials as well. This essay will discuss both arguments in details.

The basic necessitates like bread, clothing and housing are required to live and we have to buy all these things. Now a days, inflation is rising so it is putting more pressure on pockets so large amount of capital is required to maintain and enhance lifestyle. Also, it is often said that financial independence must be attained to enjoy life and for that one need to earn more. For this a person need to earn great amount of finance.

According to Maslow hierarchy of needs, once basic requirements of life are satisfied than our activities become habitually directed towards meeting the next set of needs that we have yet to satisfy, for example social and self esteem desires. So, sense of belonging and love are must to enrich one’s life. For this we need strong family relationships and friends’ company.

To conclude, we may say that money is must to achieve contentment life. Others factors includes family and friends to be cheerful.