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Käfer Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing
need real bad help with my Covering Letter!
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00 I am a german girl applying for an international company so I have to write my application form in English. I have never done that befor so i am trying to help myself through the internet. Though it is a tough job and my eyes are hurting right now i dont know if it is good or just ok and what i could do better. Please help me! i'd be grateful for any help or any suggestion!! 02 br
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00 So hear it goes: 02 br
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00 Dear Mrs. .............. 02 br
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00 I would like to apply for a position as a 00 Temporary Communications Manager SMS&P Support 00 . Mrs. .... introduced me to this job offer. 02 br
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00 Since my first day at the 00 I have been interested in marketing and the way people respond to it. This strong interest led me to start studying at the ..... from which I graduated in Mai 2007 as a communication manager with a final grad good. 02 br
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00 I gained experience in presentation in course as well as by presenting the results of our market research analyses and the ...-agency assignment to our clients and the .... principal. As a Student President I was in constant contact to our Manager, Professor’s and students including monthly meetings. 02 br
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00 During studies I have always worked part time as an account manager. Duo to my experiences I am 01 a 00 sensitised 02 a 00 for the desires and needs of my clients as well as for the concerns of the chief executive. I also gained knowled in telemarketing along with planing and organising a sceduled timetable for a fair. Being confronted with often changing situations and various needs helped me to develop an eloquent and flexible personality. 02 br
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00 I’d like to be part of ....., because it is the only company that not only uses the word diversity as a keyword but has successfully fulfilled to combine it with its corporate culture. 02 br
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00 I am free to start right away. My desired salary is estimated at 30.000 Euros a year. 02 br
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00 Thank you for your time spent reading this letter and the enclosed resume. I look forward to hearing from you. 02 br
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00 Yours sincerely 02 br
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00 I am a german girl applying for an international company so I have to write my application form in English. I have never done that befor so i am trying to help myself through the internet. Though it is a tough job and my eyes are hurting right now i dont know if it is good or just ok and what i could do better. Please help me! i'd be grateful for any help or any suggestion!! 02 br
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00 So hear it goes: 02 br
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00 Dear Mrs. .............. 02 br
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00 I would like to apply for a position as a 00 Temporary Communications Manager SMS&P Support 00 . Mrs. .... introduced me to this job offer. 02 br
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00 Since my first day at the 00 I have been interested in marketing and the way people respond to it. This strong interest led me to start studying at the ..... from which I graduated in Mai 2007 as a communication manager with a final grad good. 02 br
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00 I gained experience in presentation in course as well as by presenting the results of our market research analyses and the ...-agency assignment to our clients and the .... principal. As a Student President I was in constant contact to our Manager, Professor’s and students including monthly meetings. 02 br
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00 During studies I have always worked part time as an account manager. Duo to my experiences I am 01 a 00 sensitised 02 a 00 for the desires and needs of my clients as well as for the concerns of the chief executive. I also gained knowled in telemarketing along with planing and organising a sceduled timetable for a fair. Being confronted with often changing situations and various needs helped me to develop an eloquent and flexible personality. 02 br
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00 I’d like to be part of ....., because it is the only company that not only uses the word diversity as a keyword but has successfully fulfilled to combine it with its corporate culture. 02 br
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00 I am free to start right away. My desired salary is estimated at 30.000 Euros a year. 02 br
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00 Thank you for your time spent reading this letter and the enclosed resume. I look forward to hearing from you. 02 br
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00 Yours sincerely 02 br
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Hi everybody! i really need help! Please could anybody say if it sounds ok or if i should write it all over again because it sounds like nothing or...
- Hi everybody!
- i really need help!
- Please could anybody say if it sounds ok or if i should write it all over again because it sounds like nothing or...
- what so ever..
- PLEASE HELP
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Hi everybody!
i really need help! Please could anybody say if it sounds ok or if i should write it all over again because it sounds like nothing or... what so ever..
PLEASE HELP
i really need help! Please could anybody say if it sounds ok or if i should write it all over again because it sounds like nothing or... what so ever..
PLEASE HELP
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Quite a few silly typos. An attention to detail is important in marketing.
Dear Mrs. ..............
I would like to apply for the position as Temporary Communications Manager SMS&P Support.Mrs. .... introduced me to this job offer.
Since my first day at the University of Applied Sciences I have been interested in marketing and the way people respond to it. T
Dear Mrs. ..............
I would like to apply for the position as Temporary Communications Manager SMS&P Support.
Since my first day at the University of Applied Sciences I have been interested in marketing and the way people respond to it. T
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Hi Thank you very much for helping me!! It helped alot to make my knees stop shaking ;-)
One last question: does it sound ok? Is there enough information in it and does it sound like an interessting person? Do you have any other ideas what else i could write?
Thanks alot again for your time correcting!
Greetings
One last question: does it sound ok? Is there enough information in it and does it sound like an interessting person? Do you have any other ideas what else i could write?
Thanks alot again for your time correcting!
Greetings
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in my opinion your letter contains way too much information than necessary and the structure isn't coherent enough. Try to think like the Brits and rewrite it
in my opinion your letter contains way too much information than necessary and the structure isn't coherent enough. Try to think like the Brits and rewrite it
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Hi Kathrin,
Youre right. The structure follows more or less a german application. I tried to do it like the brit and make it shorter (with examples on the internet) but i dont know what information i can leave out to still make it sound interessting and coherent. Could you come up with any successtions?
take care
Youre right. The structure follows more or less a german application. I tried to do it like the brit and make it shorter (with examples on the internet) but i dont know what information i can leave out to still make it sound interessting and coherent. Could you come up with any successtions?
take care
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here is a very good tutorial
http://www.quintcareers.com/cover_letter_tutorial.html
and with succestions you mean suggestions?
http://www.quintcareers.com/cover_letter_tutorial.html
and with succestions you mean suggestions?
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:-) .. so sorry, yeh.. suggestions!
Thanks that site is real good as far as i can say now..
Thanks that site is real good as far as i can say now..
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KäferHi all
I am a german girl applying for an international company so I have to write my application form in English. I have never done that befor so i am trying to help myself through the internet. Though it is a tough job and my eyes are hurting right now i dont know if it is good or just ok and what i could do better. Please help me! i'd be grateful for any
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sorry for beeing away for so long!!
I had to travel a bit to take part in a Recruiting-Event....
your last paragraph is really good. I just put the last one in because i was asked for the salary but honestly i really had no idea how to say it "nicely".
In the middle part i have the problem that in a german resume you always have to say what you have allready done and w
I had to travel a bit to take part in a Recruiting-Event....
your last paragraph is really good. I just put the last one in because i was asked for the salary but honestly i really had no idea how to say it "nicely".
In the middle part i have the problem that in a german resume you always have to say what you have allready done and w
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you could go to a good bookshop and look for a book with samples in it. In Düsseldorf, in a bookshop called sternverlag, I've seen many of them, OK, not really many, 3-4 but there is enough information. One contained samples for secretary, interns, managers, etc, bright variety, so one could find something they needed. At the moment, I am using the Internet, too and collecting everyth
you could go to a good bookshop and look for a book with samples in it. In Düsseldorf, in a bookshop called sternverlag, I've seen many of them, OK, not really many, 3-4 but there is enough information. One contained samples for secretary, interns, managers, etc, bright variety, so one could find something they needed. At the moment, I am using the Internet, too and collecting everyth
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