Need opinion about my travelogue

Respected readers,

I am a woman of 55+ from India, I have started traveling solo since 2015 in the interior parts of Himalayas. I write a travel blog. I am a bit hesitant about my language, not being a native English speaker and having studied in a vernacular medium school , whether I can express myself properly. If you give your impartial opinion that my language is though not like native English people whether it is workable or not as a travelogue writer.

I shall be grateful if you give constructive suggestions.

Regards .

https://jhumka.in/