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Alc24 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

NEED MAJOR HELP WITH THESE 5 SENTENCES PLEASE

Could you please help me correct these 5 sentences please?

1 What would make you not let your husband see his daughter; if he beat her ?

2 The owner of the house tried to downplay the apartments flaws.

3 We'll eventually sell more and more and you'll ask for a pay raise.

4 The bridge I walk across the most is that one.

5 Our house is set back in relation to theirs.

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1 What would make you not let your husband see his daughter; if he beat her ? There may be a logical mistake. That her husband beats may be something what makes her not let her husband see his daughter.

— Dogukan

  • 1 What would make you not let your husband see his daughter; if he beat her ?
  • There may be a logical mistake.
  • That her husband beats may be something what makes her not let her husband see his daughter.
  • I mean, secondary clause confuses the meaning.
  • In other solution: What would you do in order not to let your husband see his daughter; if he beat her ?
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1 What would make you not let your husband see his daughter; if he beat her ? There may be a logical mistake. That her husband beats may be something what makes her not let her husband see his daughter. I mean, secondary clause confuses the meaning.
In other solution: What would you do in order not to let your husband see his daughter; if he beat her ?

2 The owner of the hou
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Thank you for your corrections.

Could someone else give me their opinion as I'm not sure of some of them?

Thank you
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