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Alc24 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

NEED LOTS HELP WITH THESE 5 sentences PLEASE?

Could you please help me correct these sentences please?

1 With every step she takes, I come closer to winning./everytime she takes a step I come closer to winning.
2 He was so different at the beginning of the night from the end of the night./There was a big difference between the beginning of the night and the end.
3 You won't be as tired if you sleep from 8pm to 5am as if you sleep/slept from 12am to 9am.
4 I suspect only John would pursue a relationship with a(s) large an age difference as the one they sported.
5 What side of the train do you get off from/on?

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alc24 Could you please help me correct these sentences please? /everytime she takes a step I come closer to winning. Every step she takes brings me closer to the winning.

  • alc24 Could you please help me correct these sentences please?
  • /everytime she takes a step I come closer to winning.
  • Every step she takes brings me closer to the winning.
  • /There was a big difference between the beginning of the night and the end.
  • There are different sentences you're trying to compare.
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alc24Could you please help me correct these sentences please?
1 With every step she takes, I come closer to winning./everytime she takes a step I come closer to winning. Every step she takes brings me closer to the winning.
2 He was so different at the beginning of the night from the end of the night./There was a big difference between the beginning of the
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1 With every step she takes, I come closer to winning. OK.
/everytime Every time she takes a step I come closer to winning. OK.
2 He was so different at the beginning of the night from the end of the night. OK but no

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