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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing

Need letter to get refund from a real estate agency.

Hello, well heres the delio i have never been good at writing letters or any sort of writing. Therefor i need major help because my father asked me to write a letter to a real estate agency to get his money back.

THE BACKGROUND INFO
My father was going to buy a home so he put XX number of dollars down for the home. But he could not get a mortgage loan from them and was not capable of buying the home , therefor, he is askin for his money back. Simply all he wants is his money back for the purchase he never made.

I would greatly appreciate it with any help at all because my family has a bad writing background and because im not originaly from america so i do not know the extended vocabulary as most people do.
  

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Hi,

Our rules are that you must try to write your letter first; we are not a letter writing service. Then post it here and we will help you improve it.
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I think the issue is more complicated than just writing a letter asking for a refund of the deposit. Whether a refund is possible depends on the nature of the real estate contract that your father signed with either the seller or the agent representing the seller. Usually, you do not sign a contract until you are sure that it covers all of the what-ifs you can think of that a
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Hey you are right, i read the contract and it stated that i can get a refund if i write them a letter. So ill write a draft of a letter and would anybody help me fix it up to be a formal letter to a business?
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Dear Ryland Homes,

I was willing to buy a home from you about a year ago, but I was unable to receive a Mortgage Approval. Not receieving the Mortgage Approval, terminated our contract, and the contract that i signed on August 26, 2005 stated that I should have received my refund of all the sums that I paid., which to this day I have not obtained.
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Dear ***

Director of Customer Services

(or Director of Sales/Marketing or whoever named in your contract to handle refund requests)

Ryland Homes

Any street

Anytown, Any state
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What you can do is ask the mortgage company to give you a letter of credit denial and attach that to the letter that you wrote.

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