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I wrote this in a response to a answer that aks to show case my leadership and influence skills:
In search of my suitable profession, I worked in few places in different organizational settings. Now I am settled down in teaching profession. Before that I joined in a large group of company as Management Trainee Officer (MTO) in which I received ample opportunities for personal enhancement and leadership qualities. I worked in their Human Resource and Commercial sector. I also involved in their CSR project. One of my biggest assignment was vising local Carrying and forwarding agent (C&F), their work procedure and observing the activities of Custom House . I was all alone in that project. I conducted 3 days long visit with the local C&F agents I had just met. I lead the group and finally wrote a systemic report on Custom House Chittagong where I critically discuss their work procedure and various loopholes. The report received wide appreciation from top management. They trained me make future leader for their organization.
I got selected to participate as one of fifty young professionals at 2ND Country A Youth Leadership summit, arranged by Bangladesh Youth Leadership Centre. Getting the opportunity to participate there was a great recognition of my leadership potential, and it gave me a wonderful opportunity to exercise leadership effectively. Sessions were conducted from distinguished national and international leaders and innovators from academia, enterprises, nonprofit sector and so forth. Aside, I became part of a powerful network of bright and accomplished youth leaders from all over the country.
Back to my current profession, I have been teaching at undergraduate level. Leadership can be defined as the art of influencing others behavior. I am taking 2 sections that comprises around 80 students. Each year I am got a chance of influencing few hundreds of best mind of the country. ABC University is the leading and pioneer private university and one of the best university in country A. Each day I am influencing the young mind. I have a strong passion to enlighten the young minds, who are going to be the future architects of our nation and of the world. , young people are the future architect of the nation. Definitely it is true. But I believe young are the hope of present, not only the future. One does not have to wait until a certain age or until he or she reached at a certain level of position. Each can play role for the country from their own position.
I am giving my utmost effort to inspire my student to do something better, to aim high, to think big. I use numerous materials like different articles, video, webpage related to their course and some are not directly related to their curriculum. Like teaching profession, there are not so many profession in which one can influence many people, especially the raw minds like youth have. I take my job seriously and trying my best to utilize the position to inspire the pupil, influence the young minds in positive direction