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Zeptouch Posted 17 years ago
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Need HUGE english help

Hi guys, my name is Ilya Gazman.
English is not my first language but it is very important for me to learn. I need you help with fixing the English in my site, only on the main page for now. It is new company that I am starting but my English isn't that good.

So I would like you to tell me every little thing that you suggest that I will improve there.

This is my site: www.zeptouch.com
  

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Hi Ilya, Good luck with your website. Please note that it's better for you to paste any text here that you'd like us to check. Most of us don't like to go off and start exploring other people's websites.

  • Hi Ilya, Good luck with your website.
  • Please note that it's better for you to paste any text here that you'd like us to check.
  • Most of us don't like to go off and start exploring other people's websites.
  • In addition, it's easier here for us to make edits.
  • Best wishes, Clive
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Hi Ilya,

Good luck with your website.

Please note that it's better for you to paste any text here that you'd like us to check.

Most of us don't like to go off and start exploring other people's websites. In addition, it's easier here for us to make edits.

Best wishes, Clive
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O.K, this is the text from my site: I hope it is easier that way

Zeptouch is new technology that let her user to flip pages in a book shown on the screen with a simple flipping sing in the air. We are not speaking about touch screen or some remote devise but this is a real progress!!

Smart sensor installed at a height of 85 inches in the air recognize you're flipping sing and tu
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Hi,

I've made a lot of edits.

What happens if several people are in the sensor field at the same time? And if more than one person makes a flip sign?

Clive

Zeptouch is a new technology that lets you flip through pages in a book shown on the screen by making a simple flipping sign in the air. This is not just a touch screen or some remote device, this is real pr
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It's not meter how many people standing in the sensor field but how many of them try to flip the page. More then one will confuse the sensor.

Tnx for you editing I will upload it right now

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