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Hi guys, my name is Ilya Gazman.
English is not my first language but it is very important for me to learn. I need you help with fixing the English in my site, only on the main page for now. It is new company that I am starting but my English isn't that good.

So I would like you to tell me every little thing that you suggest that I will improve there.

This is my site: www.zeptouch.com

Clive · Accepted Answer

Hi Ilya,

Good luck with your website.

Please note that it's better for you to paste any text here that you'd like us to check.

Most of us don't like to go off and start exploring other people's websites. In addition, it's easier here for us to make edits.

Best wishes, Clive

Zeptouch · Answer

O.K, this is the text from my site: I hope it is easier that way

Zeptouch is new technology that let her user to flip pages in a book shown on the screen with a simple flipping sing in the air. We are not speaking about touch screen or some remote devise but this is a real progress!!

Smart sensor installed at a height of 85 inches in the air recognize you're flipping sing and turn the page on the screen you are watching. The system is so smart that when you standing at the sensor visual field and making a flip sing: So every single flip sign that you can possibly think of, will be recognized by the sensor and flip the page!

The system used in restaurants where you can display a menu behind the reception position to allow customers to browse the menu from the counter using the interactive method.
You can place it on your shop window to attract the passersby with your items catalog.
The use of Zeptouch is unlimited you can use it at: Movie theaters, Airports, Shopping malls, Schools, Car parks Museums and more...

o what is it takes to install Zeptouch:
First you will need pc or laptop to connect your display devise and the sensor.

The sensor should be placed at a height of 85 inches and we suggest placing some black cover on the ground below the sensor to increase his sensitivity.

You can use any display devise you wish: it can be plasma or a small TV, projector or a movie screen. The options is unlimited, the only condition is having minimum resolution of 800X600.

All the setup installation such as sensor visual field, the pages in your catalog can be simply setup with our simple Zeptouch software that you are getting in this set.

Our set included:

- Zeptouch software with one year license

- Smart sensor

- Full Warranty for one year

* The display device and the computer must be purchased independently

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Clive · Answer

Hi,

I've made a lot of edits.

What happens if several people are in the sensor field at the same time? And if more than one person makes a flip sign?

Clive

Zeptouch is a new technology that lets you flip through pages in a book shown on the screen by making a simple flipping sign in the air. This is not just a touch screen or some remote device, this is real progress!

A smart sensor installed at a height of 85 inches recognizes your flipping sign and turns the page on the screen you are watching. The system is so smart that, when you standing in the sensor's visual field and making a flip sign, every kind of sign that you can possibly think of will be recognized by the sensor, and flip the page!

The uses for Zeptouch are unlimited! The system can be used in restaurants where you can display a menu behind the reception position. Customers can browse it from the counter using the interactive method. Or you can place the sysytem in your shop window to attract the passersby with your items catalogue. You can also use it in movie theaters, airports, shopping malls, schools, car parks, museums and more...

What is it takes to install Zeptouch:

First you will need a pc or laptop to connect your display device and the sensor.

The sensor should be placed at a height of 85 inches and we suggest placing some black covering on the ground below it to increase its sensitivity.

You can use any display device you wish: it can be plasma or a small TV, a projector or a movie screen. The options are unlimited. The only condition is it must have a minimum resolution of 800X600.

All the installation, such as sensor visual field and the pages in your catalogue, can be simply setup with our Zeptouch software that comes with the set.

The set includes:

- Zeptouch software with one year license

- Smart sensor

- Full Warranty for one year

* The display device and the computer must be purchased independently

Zeptouch · Answer

It's not meter how many people standing in the sensor field but how many of them try to flip the page. More then one will confuse the sensor.

Tnx for you editing I will upload it right now

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