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Imad Obadi Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing

Need helping hand

This is my Request for Recommendation letter , I will be send it to my Doctor through an email , but I don't have that much writing skills and I am not a native English too. It's also my first time .

So, please, look through my Request below and check any writing and grammar mistakes or some things that don't sound good in English .

I'll be thankful for all your comments.

Dear professor Kamal Ahmed,
This is Imad , from Syria and from your Surveying class, I was graduated in 2010 , Faculty of Engineering , Cairo University
I hope you are doing well
First, I would like to thank you so much for being our professor of Surveying Class,
Dear professor, you know what is happening in my country Syria , the war which destroying our life and our future.
Dear professor, I have been unemployed since 2012, and you know how it is difficult to ambitious person to lose his greatest old without doing anything.
Dear professor, I have got an opportunity to start study master degree in UK in 2016 and as a requirement to apply my application I need to get a recommendation letter from one of my doctors which I had .
I hope that you can write the recommendation letter which means a new door to my future.
Dear Professor, I appreciate your time and your help.
  

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Dear P rofessor Kamal Ahmed, This is Imad from Syria . ) . I was graduated in 2010 from the Faculty of Engineering, Cairo University .

  • Dear P rofessor Kamal Ahmed, This is Imad from Syria .
  • ) .
  • I was graduated in 2010 from the Faculty of Engineering, Cairo University .
  • I hope you are doing well .
  • First, I would like to thank you so much for being our professor in the Surveying c lass, Dear professor, you know what is happening in my country Syria ; a war which is destroying our life and our future.
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Dear Professor Kamal Ahmed,
This is Imad from Syria. I was in your Surveying class (what year?). I was graduated in 2010 from the Faculty of Engineering, Cairo University. I hope you are doing well.
First, I would like to thank you so much for being our professor in the Surveying class,
Dear professor, you kno
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Hello, Imad Obadi—and welcome to English Forums. Thank you for registering as a member.

Dear Professor Kamal,

I hope you are doing well.

I attended your surveying class and graduated in 2010 from the Faculty of Engineering, Cairo University.

You know what is happening in my country Syria: the war which destroying our lives and our future
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AlpheccaStars : Thank you very much for helping me
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Mister Micawber : I can't thank you enough! I am really grateful!

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