Need help writing a course motivation for an MBA in Netherlands.

Hi, I am applying to Saxion University in the Netherlands and have to include a Course motivation (max 2,500 characters) as well as a Educational Background letter (max 2,500 characters). So far, this is what I have for the course motivation letter. Please provide me with any feedback/criticism. I know that I need to make it "flow" better and also include more. Any suggestions?

I am writing to apply for a Master's Degree in Business Administration in which I am particularly interested. I have obtained a Bachelor Degree in Business Administration from Radford University in Radford, Virginia and have over a year of professional experience in the fields of Marketing and Sales.

I am particularly interested in the Dutch culture while international trade, logistics, business, and entrepreneurship are also interests and future career paths of mine. As Rotterdam is the largest port in Europe, I find it necessary to learn about the people, culture and language.

A Master's degree would help me further my education internationally so that I am able to develop my knowledge, passion, and skills into professional business tools. International business is an industry in itself, and a growing one at that. In order to gain a full grasp on International Business, one must have experience in cultures and nations other than his or her own.

Your prospective student,