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Venezona Posted 15 years ago
Need help with this verse
This below is a humorous verse meant to promote a video called 'Garrett's Mind'.
Please check for any errors in meaning and make suggestions how to improve it.
('the manfools' and 'the Woodsie Lord' need to stay)
the manfools grew sad and bored
with no hope of joy ahead
so they called the woodsie lord
and he came to them and said
yo, manfools, you need to see (watch)
this one film (flick) called garrett's mind
so they did and found their glee (felt top notch)
and they thanked (praised) him all combined
Please check for any errors in meaning and make suggestions how to improve it.
('the manfools' and 'the Woodsie Lord' need to stay)
the manfools grew sad and bored
with no hope of joy ahead
so they called the woodsie lord
and he came to them and said
yo, manfools, you need to see (watch)
this one film (flick) called garrett's mind
so they did and found their glee (felt top notch)
and they thanked (praised) him all combined
Top answer
the manfools grew so sad and bored, no hope of joy ahead; they called upon the woodsie lord; he came to them and said yo, manfools, now you gotta see this flick called garrett's mind. they did and in such revelry felt they'd been wined and dined
- the manfools grew so sad and bored, no hope of joy ahead; they called upon the woodsie lord; he came to them and said yo, manfools, now you gotta see this flick called garrett's mind.
- they did and in such revelry felt they'd been wined and dined
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the manfools grew so sad and bored,
no hope of joy ahead;
they called upon the woodsie lord;
he came to them and said
yo, manfools, now you gotta see
this flick called garrett's mind.
they did and in such revelry
felt they'd been wined and dined
no hope of joy ahead;
they called upon the woodsie lord;
he came to them and said
yo, manfools, now you gotta see
this flick called garrett's mind.
they did and in such revelry
felt they'd been wined and dined
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Hello Alphecca,
This helps a lot. Thank you!
Would you please 'translate' this part to a more ordinary english
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This helps a lot. Thank you!
Would you please 'translate' this part to a more ordinary english
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Also this looks exactly like the kind of nursery rhyme I was aiming for!
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Revelry is enthusiastic joy and celebration.
"Wined and dined" means to be treated to something very special. Of course, here in the poem, it is not literal, but figurative.
"Wined and dined" means to be treated to something very special. Of course, here in the poem, it is not literal, but figurative.
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Hey Alphecca,
Thanks again! You are wonderful!
I'll send you the link for the flick when its done.
Thanks again! You are wonderful!
I'll send you the link for the flick when its done.
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Hello Alphecca,
Care to see what I made with your verse?
Just follow this:
It's right at the beginning
Don't mi
Care to see what I made with your verse?
Just follow this:
It's right at the beginning
Don't mi
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