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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

need help with this sentence (too many commas?)

I believe that I am well qualified for this position. I possess Illinois State certification (Type 03), a B.A. in Elementary Education, and endorsements in Language Arts, General Science, and Social Science.
  

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The final comma is optional. You sentence is not very inspiring, though.

  • The final comma is optional.
  • You sentence is not very inspiring, though.
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The final comma is optional.
You sentence is not very inspiring, though.
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Anonymous I possess Illinois State certification (Type 03), a B.A. in Elementary Education, and endorsements in Language Arts, General Science, and Social Science.
I am just curious. What is a type 3 certification by the State of Illinois, and Endorsement in Language Arts, General Science, and Social Science. They sounded kind of weak as
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AnonymousI am just curious. What is a type 3 certification by the State of Illinois, and Endorsement in Language Arts, General Science, and Social Science. They sounded kind of weak as a cover letter material.
The position is most likely for a teacher in Illinois. The hiring manager would be familiar with the certifications.

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