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Chiachen Posted 14 years ago
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In Japan, people eat rice to accompany the meal. Rice is also the 'fundamental' ingredient to make Sushi, a traditional Japanese food, made with raw fish. The Sushi is soaked?dipped into the soy sauce, together? with a little bit of a green substance, a very spicy spice obtained from the roots of a plant called Wasabi. The entire meal must be ate?eaten with chopsticks, the typical cutlery of Asian culture.
As in Great Britain, tea is an integral part of the Japanese tradition. The tea ceremony is influenced by the Zen Buddhism, the more?most common religion in Japan. Following the tradition, many Japanese perform this special ceremony every time when they have to drink tea into? entering or inside the magnificent temples.
Kyoto is one of the cities that preserves, with? many temples, parks and places, the Japanese historical culture. Instead, Tokyo, the capital, has become a westernized city; however, it does have a few temples and parks as well. Both of the cities are the most desirable destinations for tourists.
As in Great Britain, tea is an integral part of the Japanese tradition. The tea ceremony is influenced by the Zen Buddhism, the more?most common religion in Japan. Following the tradition, many Japanese perform this special ceremony every time when they have to drink tea into? entering or inside the magnificent temples.
Kyoto is one of the cities that preserves, with? many temples, parks and places, the Japanese historical culture. Instead, Tokyo, the capital, has become a westernized city; however, it does have a few temples and parks as well. Both of the cities are the most desirable destinations for tourists.
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Hi Chiachen I corrected the passage, as seen below: In Japan, people eat rice with every meal. Rice is also the fundamental ingredient to make Sushi, a traditional Japanese dish made with raw fish. The Sushi is dipped into soy sauce together with a little bit of a green substance, which is made from a very spicy spice obtained from the roots of a plant called Wasabi.
- Hi Chiachen I corrected the passage, as seen below: In Japan, people eat rice with every meal.
- Rice is also the fundamental ingredient to make Sushi, a traditional Japanese dish made with raw fish.
- The Sushi is dipped into soy sauce together with a little bit of a green substance, which is made from a very spicy spice obtained from the roots of a plant called Wasabi.
- The entire meal must be eaten with chopsticks, the typical cutlery in Asian countries.
- As in Great Britain, tea is an integral part of Japanese tradition.
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Hi Chiachen
I corrected the passage, as seen below:
In Japan, people eat rice with every meal. Rice is also the fundamental ingredient to make Sushi, a traditional Japanese dish made with raw fish. The Sushi is dipped into soy sauce together with a little bit of a green substance, which is made from a very spicy spice obtained from the roots of a plant called Wasabi. The entire meal m
I corrected the passage, as seen below:
In Japan, people eat rice with every meal. Rice is also the fundamental ingredient to make Sushi, a traditional Japanese dish made with raw fish. The Sushi is dipped into soy sauce together with a little bit of a green substance, which is made from a very spicy spice obtained from the roots of a plant called Wasabi. The entire meal m
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Thank you Shi. I have a few questions:
1. Rice is also the fundamental ingredient to make Sushi. & Rice is the main ingredient in making Sushi.
Are above two exactly the same
2. In: The Sushi is dipped into soy sauce with a little bit of a green substance, a very hot spice obtained from the roots of
a plant called Wasabi. A. Without 'together', does the meaning re
1. Rice is also the fundamental ingredient to make Sushi. & Rice is the main ingredient in making Sushi.
Are above two exactly the same
2. In: The Sushi is dipped into soy sauce with a little bit of a green substance, a very hot spice obtained from the roots of
a plant called Wasabi. A. Without 'together', does the meaning re
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1. Rice is also the fundamental ingredient to make Sushi. & Rice is the main ingredient in making Sushi.
Both are fine.
2. In: The Sushi is dipped into soy sauce with a little bit of a green substance, a very hot spice obtained from the roots of
a plant called Wasabi. A. Without 'together', does the meaning remain the same or is it a different meaning.
I think it's better
Both are fine.
2. In: The Sushi is dipped into soy sauce with a little bit of a green substance, a very hot spice obtained from the roots of
a plant called Wasabi. A. Without 'together', does the meaning remain the same or is it a different meaning.
I think it's better
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Hi Ahi, May I ask that if, in or aside from a writing exercise, when I encounter any vocabulary words, terms/usages that I am not sure or don't know about, some of which maybe very simple and common English, I might get to consult you here often. I studied and learn the language mostly form textbooks and dictionaries in which sometimes is inadequate to learn it well. It's a bit disconcerting when
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No problem, Chiachen! Feel free to ask me any questions, from simple to difficult. I will do my best to help you.
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