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Snarf Posted 13 years ago
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Need Help With These Two Varations
When womanizer, possibly schizophrenic, Martin Cade, is suddenly offered a serious job promotion, it throws his life off balance.
When womanizer, and possible schizophrenic, Martin Cade, is suddenly offered a serious job promotion, it throws his life off balance.
Which of those two sounds better and are the commas fine? For the first one, should the commas after "schizophrenic" and "Cade" be removed? And should the first three commas be removed in the second one?
Thanks.
When womanizer, and possible schizophrenic, Martin Cade, is suddenly offered a serious job promotion, it throws his life off balance.
Which of those two sounds better and are the commas fine? For the first one, should the commas after "schizophrenic" and "Cade" be removed? And should the first three commas be removed in the second one?
Thanks.
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I would keep the and and punctuate the sentence thus: When womanizer, and possible schizophrenic, Martin Cade is …
- I would keep the and and punctuate the sentence thus: When womanizer, and possible schizophrenic, Martin Cade is …
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I would keep the and and punctuate the sentence thus:
When womanizer, and possible schizophrenic, Martin Cade is …
When womanizer, and possible schizophrenic, Martin Cade is …
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