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Yusuf789 Posted 6 years ago
Grammar

Need Help with these sentences

Please can you help me with this paragraph for any grammar mistakes or use of alternative words.

When my father emigrated to the UK he came with a vision, a purpose and a goal. He didn’t let anything stand in his way. He stuck to his principles and never wavered in the face of failure. Success was his only option. He planned his future with a great deal of optimism. In the midst of his achievements he shared with me words of inspiration. Those inspirational words set me off to be where I am today and where I want to be in the future.

Thank you.

  

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yusuf789 When my father emigrated to the U K, he came with a vision, a purpose and a goal. He didn’t let anything stand in his way. He stuck to his principles and never wavered in the face of failure.

  • yusuf789 When my father emigrated to the U K, he came with a vision, a purpose and a goal.
  • He didn’t let anything stand in his way.
  • He stuck to his principles and never wavered in the face of failure.
  • Success was his only option.
  • He planned for his future with a great deal of optimism.
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yusuf789

When my father emigrated to the UK, he came with a vision, a purpose and a goal. He didn’t let anything stand in his way. He stuck to his principles and never wavered in the face of failure. Success was his only option. He planned for his future with a great deal of optimism.

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