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Not sure the writing relate well with: Find out about organizations that help people plan reunions. Regardless, it needs help with some revisions.
The most famous way to reunion people is the social network Facebook. This internet website is totally free and every person who has a computer and an internet connection is able to join it. Facebook was born in 2004 by a Mark Zuckerberg's idea. In 2011 it has 630 millions of members, and the number is continuously growing. At this moment, its sales figures amount of about 550 millions of dollars. People use facebook to make friends or to find old friends, but it is also used for playing games, kept informed, keep up with programs for the next days, chatting, posting pictures etc..Also famous people, bands, movies and artists use facebook as a good way to advertise themselves. The future way to talk and keeping in touch with family, friends and business will be Facebook. Some companies do interviews using Skype to hire future employees. Skype is an application in which it is possible to make video call and chatting. Recently, Facebook has incorporated Skype functions and now it is able to do everything.
The most famous way to reunion people is the social network Facebook. This internet website is totally free and every person who has a computer and an internet connection is able to join it. Facebook was born in 2004 by a Mark Zuckerberg's idea. In 2011 it has 630 millions of members, and the number is continuously growing. At this moment, its sales figures amount of about 550 millions of dollars. People use facebook to make friends or to find old friends, but it is also used for playing games, kept informed, keep up with programs for the next days, chatting, posting pictures etc..Also famous people, bands, movies and artists use facebook as a good way to advertise themselves. The future way to talk and keeping in touch with family, friends and business will be Facebook. Some companies do interviews using Skype to hire future employees. Skype is an application in which it is possible to make video call and chatting. Recently, Facebook has incorporated Skype functions and now it is able to do everything.
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Revised writing: The easiest way to reunite people is through Facebook, a social networking site. The website is free and everyone who has a computer and an Internet connection can join. Facebook was created in 2004 by Mark Zuckerberg.
- Revised writing: The easiest way to reunite people is through Facebook, a social networking site.
- The website is free and everyone who has a computer and an Internet connection can join.
- Facebook was created in 2004 by Mark Zuckerberg.
- In 2011 it already has 630 millions members, and is continuously growing as we speak.
- It has a profit of about 550 million dollars.
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Revised writing: The easiest way to reunite people is through Facebook, a social networking site. The website is free and everyone who has a computer and an Internet connection can join. Facebook was created in 2004 by Mark Zuckerberg. In 2011 it already has 630 millions members, and is continuously growing as we speak. It has a profit of about 550 million dollars.
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