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Chiachen Posted 14 years ago
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My last vacation, I was in San Andres Island (Colombia), the sea is very beautiful, you can snorkel, sunbathe, swim and ate very delicious food.

The archipelago of San Andres, Providencia and Santa Catalina, is listed by the United Nations as a World Biosphere Reserve.

I recommend visiting the island Johnny Cay, Hole blower and Cave of Morgan. To eat fish, lobster, crab, fish ball, coconut rice and desserts.
  

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I have underlined some problem areas. Please try to correct them and post your revised text. My last vacation, I was in San Andres Island (Colombia ), the sea is very beau tiful, yo u can snorkel, sunbathe, swim and ate very delicious food.

  • I have underlined some problem areas.
  • Please try to correct them and post your revised text.
  • My last vacation, I was in San Andres Island (Colombia ), the sea is very beau tiful, yo u can snorkel, sunbathe, swim and ate very delicious food.
  • The archipelago of San Andres, Providencia and Santa Cata lina, is listed by the United Nations as a World Biosphere Reserve.
  • I recommend visiting the island Johnny Ca y, Hole blower and Cave of Mor gan.
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I have underlined some problem areas. Please try to correct them and post your revised text.

My last vacation, I was in San Andres Island (Colombia), the sea is very beautiful, you can snorkel, sunbathe, swim and ate very delicious food.

The archipelago of San Andres, Providencia and Santa Catalina, is listed by the United Nations as a W
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Hi,

On my last vacation, I was in San Andres Island (Colombia). The sea is very beautiful.You can snorkel, sunbathe, swim and eat ( very ) delicious food. Avoid run-on sentences.

The archipelago of San Andres, Providencia and Santa Catalina is listed by the United Nations as a World Biosphere Reserve.

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