need help with the correction of my motivation letter!!

Hope someone can help me with the correction of this motivation letter for my bachelor degree as a foreigner student at a university in the netherlands.
Here below is a copy of my letter where I cutted the name of the institution I'm applying for:

Motivation Letter
Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m a Colombian student currently living in the Netherlands and trying to apply for the Communication course in English. After had stopped my previous bachelor course three years ago, to priories my new born daughter, I’m more then ready to return to the academic world. After a short analysis of myself I got to the conclusion that I’m someone with a very critical thinking and flexibility in making sense of information, I have a high level of intercultural communication competence (I’ve being living abroad since I was 15 and dealing with all different cultures and people) and good listening and speaking skills(I’m someone extremely social, having my strong moments when working in groups or when interacting). So I sincerely believe that the international ambiance and the strong course program of Communication at (university name) can gives me a wonderful basis to achieve my main goals in life.



In our modern world Communication is the key for everything in all different sectors of human life, so therefore the importance of be able to understand the complex process of communicate, the role of media in our society and to have the ability to facilitate this process in a local and global level. Due to the fact that I’m extremely curious and always ready to learn new things the communication process is more then a constant in my life, but something completely essential. Be able to interact and pass a message from one side to the other of the planet with minutes just fascinates me. The all process of communicate with someone is already something special, even more if you will be able to give or expose your ideas for an all community or even the world. That is the main reason why I want to study communication.

Hopefully after this course I’ll be able to specialize in mass media communication and become a strong professional in this area. My aim is to be able to work with the media in an international field, since I can speak different languages and I just love to be dealing with different cultures. Therefore, my goals are to develop my aptitudes and improve on them to a degree that would allow me to be a high quality professional. Because I have family and friends which were students from Inholland before, the school was one of the first that I considered to apply, and after research better and visit the build, as well talk with some of the communications students I completely made my mind.



I do believe that (university name) can give me what I need to achieve my results and I do know that I’m the student type that (university name) search for. Being someone interactive and mind speaker with a strong international past and a good academic background, I just can’t wait to start!!



Thanks for all the consideration, hope to hear from you soon.
My best regards,