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Johndoe1234 Posted 11 years ago
Grammar
Need help with sentence
Changing your life may start as simply as changing the color of your kitchen!
Reliable paint professionals are waiting to work with you! We have been making colorful changes in the lives of people just like you for over 22 years! Commercial or residential, big or small, we do it all! Call us to arrange your free estimate. Start your change today! We service Nashville and surrounding areas. Need help making this sound more professional also I need to know if it's written correctly.
Reliable paint professionals are waiting to work with you! We have been making colorful changes in the lives of people just like you for over 22 years! Commercial or residential, big or small, we do it all! Call us to arrange your free estimate. Start your change today! We service Nashville and surrounding areas. Need help making this sound more professional also I need to know if it's written correctly.
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Too many exclamation points! Otherwise, it is fine, but it should be whittled down a bit: . Changing your life may start as simply as changing the color of your kitche n.
- Too many exclamation points!
- Otherwise, it is fine, but it should be whittled down a bit: .
- Changing your life may start as simply as changing the color of your kitche n.
- Our reliable paint professionals have been making colorful changes i n people's lives for 22 years / over 20 years / almost 25 years .
- Commercial or residential, big or small, we do it all!
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Too many exclamation points! Otherwise, it is fine, but it should be whittled down a bit:
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Changing your life may start as simply as changing the color of your kitchen.
Our reliable paint professionals have been making colorful changes in people's lives for 22 years / over 20 years / almost 25 years. Commercial or residential, big
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Changing your life may start as simply as changing the color of your kitchen.
Our reliable paint professionals have been making colorful changes in people's lives for 22 years / over 20 years / almost 25 years. Commercial or residential, big
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Our reliable paint professionals have been making colorful changes in people's lives for over two decades. Commercial or residential, big or small, we do it all! We serve Nashville and surrounding areas. Call us for a free estimate.
do you think this looks and sounds better?
do you think this looks and sounds better?
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Should it be Nashville and sorounding areas or Nashville and the sorounding area?
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As long as you spell 'surrounding' correctly, you may use either.
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Thank you. I also plan on using this short description. For over two decades, our family-owned business has specialized in interior and exterior painting, including that for commercial and residential buildings. Is there anything wrong with this one?
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Johndoe1234 Is there anything wrong with this one?'That for' is rather stilted and can be dispensed with.
For over two decades, our family-owned business has specialized in interior and exterior painting, including commercial and residential buildings.
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Hello mr John Doe this is Steve smith with smith painting we have recently made a facebook page for are business and we where hoping you could take a few moments of your time to give us a review of the paint job experience we did for you awhile back. I also need help with this. I need to make it sound more professional and of course comma placement.
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It looks like I'm doing a lot of work for your business. Would you like to hire me? Details are on my member profile.
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