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Chalk zany Posted 9 years ago
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Need help with puncutation and this sentence ...

DCF began working to help Lynn and her children, and DCF knew CBC was a great fit for them. Why? Because at CBC we treat the whole family, including, many times, estranged or ex-spouses.


Are the commas in the right place?

  

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Yes, but I'd get rid of a few commas by rewording a little. DCF began working to help Lynn and her children, and DCF knew CBC was a great fit for them. Why?

— Clive

  • Yes, but I'd get rid of a few commas by rewording a little.
  • DCF began working to help Lynn and her children, and DCF knew CBC was a great fit for them.
  • Why?
  • Because at CBC we treat the whole family, often including estranged or ex-spouses.
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Yes, but I'd get rid of a few commas by rewording a little.


DCF began working to help Lynn and her children, and DCF knew CBC was a great fit for them. Why? Because at CBC we treat the whole family, often including estranged or ex-spouses.

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