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Denna1001 Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Need help with practicing longer sentence.

She moved towards her dresser table, her wrinkled hands caressed an old photo.
  

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Hi, She moved towards her dresser table, her wrinkled hands caressed an old photo. This is not correct. These are two separate sentences, incorrectly joined only by a comma.

— Clive

  • Hi, She moved towards her dresser table, her wrinkled hands caressed an old photo.
  • This is not correct.
  • These are two separate sentences, incorrectly joined only by a comma.
  • Here are some ways to correct this.
  • She moved towards her dresser table.
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Hi,

She moved towards her dresser table, her wrinkled hands caressed an old photo.

This is not correct. These are two separate sentences, incorrectly joined only by a comma.



Here are some ways to correct this.

She moved towards her dresser table. Her wrinkled hands caressed an old photo.

She moved towards her dresser table, and her
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