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001. "C'mon, you two. Let's go get our tickets."02br
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002. Parallel to the pectators' bleachers. (i'd say yes. because it's who's bleachers.)02br
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003. They race down the track at incredible speed(s).or is it: at an incredible speed. ? (They = race cars.)02br
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004. They drive under (a arch bridge or an arch bridge). (?)02br
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005. The birds fly out like angry ( ) wild beasts. (i'd say no comma.)02br
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006. She witnesses the crash then turns to Sam. (could that be writen better?)02br
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007. They follow the old man (down / between) the rows of tables.(?)02br
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008. They stop in front of a gigantic ( ) dark silhouette. (i'd say no comma.)02br
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