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need help with phrases

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001. It hits the floor rolling towards the edge of the stairs.02br
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002. It hits the floor rolling, heading towards the edge of the stairs.0-
  

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12br 12br 101. It hits the floor rolling towards the edge of the stairs. 11font 10Comma after floor indicates it starts to roll after it hit the floor12font 12br 12br 10or12br 12br 102.

— Philip

  • 12br 12br 101.
  • It hits the floor rolling towards the edge of the stairs.
  • 11font 10Comma after floor indicates it starts to roll after it hit the floor12font 12br 12br 10or12br 12br 102.
  • It hits the floor rolling, heading towards the edge of the stairs.
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01cite10Market12cite10wich one is better?12br
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101. It hits the floor rolling towards the edge of the stairs. 11font10Comma after floor indicates it starts to roll after it hit the floor12font12br
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102. It hits the
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0i want it to hit the floor then roll towards the edge of the stairs.02br
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00would this one be it. 02br
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001. It hits the floor, rolling towards the edge of the stairs.02br
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002. It hits the floor and rolls owards the edge of the stairs. (but i have too many "and's" allready)0-
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01 is ok.02br
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0thanks guys...02br
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00need help with another sentence. ( i want to have a stairwell going upwards)02br
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001. From the side of the stage, a section of the wall crumbles, revealing a stairwell leading up.02br
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002. From the side of the stage, a section of the wall crumbles, revealing a stairwell 01del00verbing0
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