Need help with my motivation letter

Hi!

Could someone please take a look at my motivation letter. It's for a summer school. And yes, it's supposed to be short.
Any comments are welcome!
Thank you in advance!

Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to apply to the summer school course “...“. I am a Bachelor of Arts in Business Economics with a major in Analysis and Business Planning. Currently I am writing my final thesis, on a graduate level at ....

Two summers ago I attened “...“ and realised that wasn't my field of interest and the direction I want my career to start developing. So last summer I enroled into “...“ in sometown, somecountry. I've really enjoyed it and I hope to upgrade that knowledge and broaden my horizons with this summer course.

This summer school is a great opportunity to learn something new, learn a new language, meet new people and also get to know ... and ... and a little better.





Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.



Sincerely yours,