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Zheng Posted 22 years ago
Letter Writing
Need help with my letter
Hi All,
I wrote the below letter but feel like it is too short and grammatically incorrect. I would appreciate if someone help me refine it. I have to apologize for not making up to the appointment and request for a new appointment and i need to give reasons for the cancellation of the appointment.
Thanks in advance.
The below is my letter
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February 10, 2004
Dr. ***
Assistant Professor, Department of English
PO Box 111
WV University
Buckhann, WV 26506
Dear Dr. ***:
I am writing to apologize to you for canceling today’s appointment. I could not make it up because of the bad weather.
I would appreciate if you would schedule a new appointment.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
Zheng
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I wrote the below letter but feel like it is too short and grammatically incorrect. I would appreciate if someone help me refine it. I have to apologize for not making up to the appointment and request for a new appointment and i need to give reasons for the cancellation of the appointment.
Thanks in advance.
The below is my letter
***
February 10, 2004
Dr. ***
Assistant Professor, Department of English
PO Box 111
WV University
Buckhann, WV 26506
Dear Dr. ***:
I am writing to apologize to you for canceling today’s appointment. I could not make it up because of the bad weather.
I would appreciate if you would schedule a new appointment.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
Zheng
***
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*** *** Address Dear Dr: *** I was not able to make my appointment on February 17, 2004 because of the bad weather. I apologize for the inconvinience. I would appreciate if you would schedule another appoitment.
- *** *** Address Dear Dr: *** I was not able to make my appointment on February 17, 2004 because of the bad weather.
- I apologize for the inconvinience.
- I would appreciate if you would schedule another appoitment.
- Thank you.
- Sincerely *** (I hope my letter help you - I am not too good at writing either.
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Dear Dr: ***
I was not able to make my appointment on February 17, 2004 because of the bad weather. I apologize for the inconvinience. I would appreciate if you would schedule another appoitment. Thank you.
Sincerely
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(I hope my letter help you - I am not too good at writing either. Thank you.
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Address
Dear Dr: ***
I was not able to make my appointment on February 17, 2004 because of the bad weather. I apologize for the inconvinience. I would appreciate if you would schedule another appoitment. Thank you.
Sincerely
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(I hope my letter help you - I am not too good at writing either. Thank you.
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Address
Dear Dr: ***
I was not able to make my appointment on February 17, 2004 because of the bad weather. I apologize for the inconvinience. I would appreciate if you would schedule another appoitment. Thank you.
Sincerely
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Address
Dear Dr: ***
I was not able to make my appointment on February 17, 2004 because of the bad weather. I apologize for the inconvinience. I would appreciate if you would schedule another appoitment. Thank you.
Sincerely
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