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Kmj764 Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
Need help with grammar
On planned policies, rising fossil energy use will lead to irreversible and potentially catastrophic climate change … we are on an even more dangerous track to an increase of 6°C warming this century would probably mean suffering beyond imagination for billions:
Does the sentence 'we are... billions' many any sense in this paragraph in terms of grammar? It sounds wrong to me.
I'd like to be clear on this.
Any help would be appreciated!
Jun
Does the sentence 'we are... billions' many any sense in this paragraph in terms of grammar? It sounds wrong to me.
I'd like to be clear on this.
Any help would be appreciated!
Jun
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kmj764 On planned policies, rising fossil energy use will lead to irreversible and potentially catastrophic climate change … we are on an even more dangerous track to an increase of 6°C warming this century would probably mean suffering beyond imagination for billions: It is not correctly structured: Here is the change you need: ... we are on an even more dangerous track to an increase of 6°C warming this century which would probably mean suffering beyond imagination for billions:
- kmj764 On planned policies, rising fossil energy use will lead to irreversible and potentially catastrophic climate change … we are on an even more dangerous track to an increase of 6°C warming this century would probably mean suffering beyond imagination for billions: It is not correctly structured: Here is the change you need: ...
- we are on an even more dangerous track to an increase of 6°C warming this century which would probably mean suffering beyond imagination for billions:
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kmj764On planned policies, rising fossil energy use will lead to irreversible and potentially catastrophic climate change … we are on an even more dangerous track to an increase of 6°C warming this century would probably mean suffering beyond imagination for billions:It is not correctly structured: Here is the change you need:
... we are on an even m
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