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Raine2005 Posted 16 years ago
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HI, I would appreciated it very much if someone can help me find errors in this paragraph thank you so much Emotion: smile thank you Emotion: smile

Walking around the block in my tree-lined neighborhood, I seen a white kitten sitting in the shade of an oak. The kitten took one look at me, mewed piteously, and begun to follow me. By the time I reached the end of the block, she is snuggling against my shoulder as I carefully carried her along. I knew my husband did not want another cat, but by the time I reached my front door, I had figured out a way around this. I sat the kitten on the porch and opened the door, saying to my husband, "Look what followed me home." The kitten, later to be called prudence, stretched her neck, taken a peek inside the living room, and bleated a cry for help. My husband asked Did she really follow you all that way? "I'll bet someone dumped her on the side of the road, and then they drove off," I said, not answering his question. My husband and me fed Prudence on the front porch for the next several days, just in case a neighbor knocked on our door to reclaim the kitten. The knock on the door never came, Prudence entered the living room on the fourth day and never looked back.
  

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raine2005 HI, I would appreciated it very much if someone can help me find errors in this paragraph thank you so much thank you Walking around the block in my tree-lined neighborhood, I seen saw a white kitten sitting in the shade of an oak. The kitten took one look at me, mewed piteously, and begun began to follow me. By the time I reached the end of the block, she is was snuggling against my shoulder , as so I carefully carried her along.

  • raine2005 HI, I would appreciated it very much if someone can help me find errors in this paragraph thank you so much thank you Walking around the block in my tree-lined neighborhood, I seen saw a white kitten sitting in the shade of an oak.
  • The kitten took one look at me, mewed piteously, and begun began to follow me.
  • By the time I reached the end of the block, she is was snuggling against my shoulder , as so I carefully carried her along.
  • I knew my husband did not want another cat, but by the time I reached my front door, I had figured out a way around this.
  • I sat set the kitten on the porch and opened the door, saying to my husband, "Look what followed me home !
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raine2005HI, I would appreciated it very much if someone can help me find errors in this paragraph thank you so much
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thank you so much I'm glad to see I had most of the same corrections but was unsure. Too bad I didn't see this forum awhile ago I could have used the help thanks again, that was greatly appreciated

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