need help with corrections and modifications in my CoverLetter ...thanks

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00Please help me in checking my covering letter too. I graduated with Masters in Electrical Engineering from FachHoch Schule, 02pre

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00Furtwangen this February. Now I am looking for a job in the industry. There is a Job fair in this month and following is a 02pre

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00cover letter I drafted to send with my unsolicited application to the companies.02pre

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00Please let me know the corrections and where can I improve. All your comments will be very helpful. Thank you.02pre

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00**** Covering Letter ****02pre

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00Dear Mr. ***,02pre

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00I am writing to inquire about future placement possibilities with YYYYY. I learned of your firm 02pre

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00while going through the list of the organisations that will participate in the career fair----. 02pre

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00Based on my research on your website, I believe there would be a good fit between my skills and 02pre

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00interests and your needs.02pre

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00I have completed my Master's degree in Electrical Engineering from FachHoch Schule, Furtwangen. 02pre

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00The coursework has supplied me with a good understanding of Computer Engineering concepts and 02pre

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00likewise given me a comprehensive exposure to disciplines like Coding Theory, Computer Networks, 02pre

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00Digital Signal Processing, Multimedia Technology, Software Engineering, Telecommunications. My 02pre

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00reserach interests are primely focused on Mobile Communication and Embedded Systems which 02pre

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00supplemented me in doing my thesis in Mobile Multimedia and later followed by publishing a 02pre

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00conference paper. I am well versed with programming in C and C++, having undertaken several 02pre

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00projects in the same. Enclosed is my curriculum-vitae which further outlines my qualifications.02pre

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00While working towards my Master’s degree, I have had a variety of student jobs and research02pre

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00positions. The industry assignments have truly been a truly rewarding experience. Studying02pre

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00for a degree and working have made it necessary for me to learn how to prioritize tasks and02pre

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00have instilled in me the need to remain flexible. I have had to be highly organised in order to02pre

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00meet deadlines both at school and work. Along with, I also developed an appreciation for team02pre

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00ability, thanks to the senior and fellow colleagues in my previous endeavours. In addition to my02pre

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00technical experience, I have excellent communication skills having given several presentations02pre

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00and organised symposiums at the University.02pre

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00With my strong academic base, starting a challenging career in a premier organization like02pre

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00yours with focus on innovative research and development is a natural and corner stone of my02pre

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00professional aspiration. I am certainly willing to explore this further and would very much02pre

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00appreciate the opportunity to have a discussion with you in this regard. Thank you for your02pre

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00consideration. I look forward to talking with you.02pre

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00Your’s sincerely02pre

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