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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing
Need help with application letter
Hello everybody,
I need help with my letter of application so if anyone can give their opinion on it and correct grammar mistakes.
Thanks in advance!
Dear Ms X,
I am writing to apply for the 3 months Summer Internship, if possible with a start date of July 6, 2015. Reading about X I realised how that is one stable global company with focus on customer satisfaction as long as there are all aspects fulfilled and concerns resolved . X is also one of the world's leading specialist in the field of drive and control technologies which is exactly my area of interest and those are the reasons why I would like to experience how it is to be part of this company.
I am currently pursuing my Bachelor of Science Degree in Electrical Engineering and Information Technology with anticipated graduation date of July 2015. As undergraduate at the University of X, I have gained a good deal of knowledge in power electronics, various control techniques for electrical drives and applications of sensors in automation systems. In addition to my theoretical knowledge, I have also acquired various computer skills as You can see in my CV. I have had the opportunity to apply my skills through Project in the last semester. The Project was called „Integration of electric motor drive in automation system“ where we were controlling AC motor using frequency converter and Siemens Simatic S7-300 PLC.
An internship would be a great opportunity to present my understanding of the technical principles, as well as ability to communicate effectively in English and willingness to work hard. While I am gaining good experience as a student, an internship with X would help me to become fully immersed in an engineering environment and learn more about automation systems. Furthermore, this would be a great opportunity for me to improve my basic knowledge of German.
Please find CV with additional information about my education. I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss my qualifications for the internship more fully. Thank you very much for your consideration and I look forward to talking with you soon.
Sincerely,
X
I need help with my letter of application so if anyone can give their opinion on it and correct grammar mistakes.
Thanks in advance!
Dear Ms X,
I am writing to apply for the 3 months Summer Internship, if possible with a start date of July 6, 2015. Reading about X I realised how that is one stable global company with focus on customer satisfaction as long as there are all aspects fulfilled and concerns resolved . X is also one of the world's leading specialist in the field of drive and control technologies which is exactly my area of interest and those are the reasons why I would like to experience how it is to be part of this company.
I am currently pursuing my Bachelor of Science Degree in Electrical Engineering and Information Technology with anticipated graduation date of July 2015. As undergraduate at the University of X, I have gained a good deal of knowledge in power electronics, various control techniques for electrical drives and applications of sensors in automation systems. In addition to my theoretical knowledge, I have also acquired various computer skills as You can see in my CV. I have had the opportunity to apply my skills through Project in the last semester. The Project was called „Integration of electric motor drive in automation system“ where we were controlling AC motor using frequency converter and Siemens Simatic S7-300 PLC.
An internship would be a great opportunity to present my understanding of the technical principles, as well as ability to communicate effectively in English and willingness to work hard. While I am gaining good experience as a student, an internship with X would help me to become fully immersed in an engineering environment and learn more about automation systems. Furthermore, this would be a great opportunity for me to improve my basic knowledge of German.
Please find CV with additional information about my education. I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss my qualifications for the internship more fully. Thank you very much for your consideration and I look forward to talking with you soon.
Sincerely,
X
Top answer
I am writing to apply for the three months ' s ummer i nternship, if possible with a start date of July 6, 2015. Reading about X I realize that it is a global company with a close focus on customer satisfaction. X is also one of the world's leading specialist s in the field of drive and control technologies which is exactly my area of interest.
- I am writing to apply for the three months ' s ummer i nternship, if possible with a start date of July 6, 2015.
- Reading about X I realize that it is a global company with a close focus on customer satisfaction.
- X is also one of the world's leading specialist s in the field of drive and control technologies which is exactly my area of interest.
- Thus, those are the reasons why I would like to experience how it is to be part of this company.
- I am currently pursuing my Bachelor of Science Degree in Electrical Engineering and Information Technology with an anticipated graduation date in July 2015.
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I am writing to apply for the three months' summer internship, if possible with a start date of July 6, 2015. Reading about X I realize that it is a global company with a close focus on customer satisfaction. X is also one of the world's leading specialists in the field of drive and control technologies which is exactly my area
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