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Need help with application

Hi,
I am trying to write an application as Game Master at Blizzard. I don't = =
have any experience in writing formal british english (I am german), so = I =
want to ask if somebody would be so kind and check for grammar or maybe = =
give some suggestions?
Thanks ;-)
Application as Game Master DE
Dear Sir/Madam
with reference to your advertisement on wow-europe.com I am writing to =

apply as Game Master (DE). At the moment I am a student at Technical =

University Darmstadt and working on my Bachelors degree in computer =

technologie.
Since role-playing-games have allways been my favourite hobby, I now am = =
developer and administrator of my own german browser-based RPG with more= =
than 4.000 active players. In its now allmost two years of existance I w= as =
able to gain wide experience with people and in supporting communities i= n =
a team. I am familiar with all sorts of community tools.

Furthermore I enjoy working with people very much, and working at a =

company like Blizzard allways has been one of my dreams, since I want to= =
use my skills in a productive and enjoyable environment.

Finally I enclose my CV and a copy of my educational qualification.

I would appriciate the opportunity to discuss matters further at a =

personal interview
Yours faithfully,
Stefan Buhrmester
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  • Thanks ;-) Application as Game Master DE[/nq] Application as* or *for ?
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[nq:1]Hi, I am trying to write an application as Game Master at Blizzard. I don't have any experience in writing formal british english (I am german), so I want to ask if somebody would be so kind and check for grammar or[/nq]
so kind as to check the grammar
[nq:1]maybe give some suggestions? Thanks ;-) Application as Game Master DE[/nq]
Application as* or *for ?
[nq:1]Dear
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Run it through a spell-check routine...
technology
always
almost
4,000 (Americans and Britains use the comma, not the period) Otherwise it looks fine
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[nq:2]developer and administrator of my own german browser-based RPG with[/nq]
missed one...
German
You should also probably provide them with the URL
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[nq:1](very much helpfull stuff)[/nq]
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[nq:2](very much helpfull stuff)[/nq]
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RTFD
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[nq:1](sigh) RTFD[/nq]
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