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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Need help with a paragraph about what I do in my spare time
I need you guys to read the below paragraph and give me suggestions on how I can avoid, the "I"s in the para.
In my spare time, I would usually watch movies and listen to music and often visit friends and family. I also love travelling and have visited about 10 countries.
I am a member of the Royal Aeronautical Engineering Society and attend most of the lectures arranged by them in our University and also attend various other lectures offered by leading companies in the industry.
I read Aerospace Professional and Aerospace International magazines and keep myself updated with the news in the industry.
I am also a member of the Southampton University Engineering Society and most trips to industrial sites are arranged by them and I have visited some sites, in particular the Rolls Royce site at Derby.
wrote it off the top of my head, but something seems wrong... the I's are a bit too much, any way to rephrase the sentences?
In my spare time, I would usually watch movies and listen to music and often visit friends and family. I also love travelling and have visited about 10 countries.
I am a member of the Royal Aeronautical Engineering Society and attend most of the lectures arranged by them in our University and also attend various other lectures offered by leading companies in the industry.
I read Aerospace Professional and Aerospace International magazines and keep myself updated with the news in the industry.
I am also a member of the Southampton University Engineering Society and most trips to industrial sites are arranged by them and I have visited some sites, in particular the Rolls Royce site at Derby.
wrote it off the top of my head, but something seems wrong... the I's are a bit too much, any way to rephrase the sentences?
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We need you guys who ask for help to do it politely, which involves the word "please," please. If you have been asked to describe yourself, your interests and activities, there is really no way to avoid using "I" frequently.
- We need you guys who ask for help to do it politely, which involves the word "please," please.
- If you have been asked to describe yourself, your interests and activities, there is really no way to avoid using "I" frequently.
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We need you guys who ask for help to do it politely, which involves the word "please," please.
If you have been asked to describe yourself, your interests and activities, there is really no way to avoid using "I" frequently.
If you have been asked to describe yourself, your interests and activities, there is really no way to avoid using "I" frequently.
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