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Alila Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing

need help with a letter to embassy

Hi! I'm going to Ireland for language courses and need to write a letter to embassy to get a visa. As my English is far from perfect i'd be glad if someone would be so kind to check what i've written. )

Well, here it is:
Dear Sir or Madam, I’ve always been interested in studying the English language. At school we began learning English since our second year. Later I took private lessons for some time to improve my skills and grammar level. My attachment to studying the language helped me to choose university. Now I’m a student of Russian university of peoples’ friendship.
This year I’ve got an exciting opportunity to visit Ireland – a country I’ve always dreamed of. My parents offered to pay language courses at Aspect (International Language Academies) in Dublin. I should say I’ve never been abroad yet, that’s why having such a chance makes me be in happy foretaste. I will be able to gain experience and knowledge not only through classes and books, but also by communicating with native speakers. A great possibility to dive in the language.
But English is not the only reason for this trip. Irish culture has really fascinated me, and I am keen on learning more about it. In addition, attending language courses, I will have opportunities to meet people from various nations and cultures, offering me different points of view and contributing to my flexibility and creativity, besides the cultural and language gains. The knowledge, skills and experiences that I benefit from the educational programme will contribute greatly to my future career. In the end of the next year in my university I will take an exam for certificate of an interpreter. I hope this will help me in my future work in the sphere of chemistry.

Oh, and one more thing - I don't know how to finish. Please give me some advice. ^_^
  

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Well, here it is: Dear Sir or Madam, I’ve always been interested in studying the English language. At school we began learning English since our second year. Later I took private lessons for some time to improve my skills and grammar level.

  • Well, here it is: Dear Sir or Madam, I’ve always been interested in studying the English language.
  • At school we began learning English since our second year.
  • Later I took private lessons for some time to improve my skills and grammar level.
  • My attachment to studying the language helped me to choose university.
  • Now I’m a student of Russian university of peoples’ friendship.
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Well, here it is:
Dear Sir or Madam,

I’ve always been interested in studying the English language. At school we began learning English since our second year. Later I took private lessons for some time to improve my skills and grammar level. My attachment to studying the language helped me to choose university. Now I’m a student of Russian university of peoples’ friendship.

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