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Wepro Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Need help .TOEFL ibt speaking response !!!!!!

Here is my TOEFL response. Can anyone here show my my mistake or make some suggestions for a better expression in my response ?Thanks in advance.

Do you prefer to write a paper or give an oral presentation ?
There are 2 reasons why for me it's always better to write a paper than to give an oral presentation.
First of all,I am not quite an eloquent or lively speaker .
When talking before class about a particular subject , I can't help myself getting nervous
so I'm often faced with the prospect of forgetting all my point.
I remember I once got an F on my biology oral exam even when i had prepared for it quite carefully.
The second reason why I'd prefer a paper test is may be I'm not good at speaking but I'm a gifted writer .
Unlike speaking , I know how to express my idea or give an answer in my writing clearly and coherently.
Some of my paragraphs were printed (published / put ???) in the school newspaper.
So only by taking a paper test can I extend my writing skill and receive a deserving grade.
  

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There are 2 reasons why for me it's always better to write a paper than to give an oral presentation. First of all, I am not quite an eloquent or lively speaker. When talking before in front of a class about a particular subject, I can't help myself for getting nervous so I'm often faced with the prospect possibility of forgetting all my point.

  • There are 2 reasons why for me it's always better to write a paper than to give an oral presentation.
  • First of all, I am not quite an eloquent or lively speaker.
  • When talking before in front of a class about a particular subject, I can't help myself for getting nervous so I'm often faced with the prospect possibility of forgetting all my point.
  • I remember once I got an ''F'' on my biology oral exam even when I had prepared for it quite carefully because I got nervous.
  • The second reason why I'd prefer a paper written test is may be I'm not because I may not be good at speaking but I'm a gifted writer.
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There are 2 reasons why for me it's always better to write a paper than to give an oral presentation.
First of all, I am not quite an eloquent or lively speaker. When talking before in front of a class about a particular subject, I can't help myself for getting nervous so I'm often faced with the prospect possibility of forgetting all my point. I remember once I got an ''F'' on my biology oral

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