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Mizanur Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

need help to write email for funding

Any modification and grammatical correction is highly appreciated:

I really feel honored to have gotten chance at ABC School. Unfortunately I have not been awarded the scholarship (DD Scholarship) I applied for. I could not afford the cost to study at ABC School. I do not want to lose this opportunity. I am so into ABC School.
An applicant, who wants to be funded by DD scholarship, is allowed to apply up to three master courses. I have applied only to abc School since its programme structure is a precise match for me. I got my desired admission, but I have not been awarded the funding.
In this backdrop, I badly need alternative funding. Is there any scholarship offered by Hertie School I can apply for? I would be grateful if you provide me scholarship information in details (like how to apply and when to apply) where I am eligible to apply.
Any suggestion on other funding is also appreciated highly.
  

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I really feel very honored to have been approved to study gotten chance at ABC School. Unfortunately I have not been awarded the scholarship (DD Scholarship) I applied for. I can could not afford the cost to study at ABC School.

  • I really feel very honored to have been approved to study gotten chance at ABC School.
  • Unfortunately I have not been awarded the scholarship (DD Scholarship) I applied for.
  • I can could not afford the cost to study at ABC School.
  • I do not want to lose this opportunity.
  • I am so enthusiastic about studying there into ABC Schoo l.
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I really feel very honored to have been approved to study gotten chance at ABC School. Unfortunately I have not been awarded the scholarship (DD Scholarship) I applied for. I can could not afford the cost to study at ABC School. I do not want to lose this opportunity. I am so enthusiastic about studying there into ABC School.
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I checked their website; they offer scholarship in the form of tuition reduction (40-100%). Besides, they have another scholarship scheme for perspective student. In latter case, the scholarship benefit was not stated in the website; only application procedure was given there.
Moreover, they have some external funding bodies. They asked to contact their student affairs team to know anything ab
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I got the following reply after sending email to graduate admission committee
""Thank you for your email. No separate application for one our tuition waivers is necessary. We already have considered you in our first scholarship allocation round. You will receive an email concerning a scholarship from us this week.""
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I got result, I am not receiving any tuition waver :/
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Mizanur I got result, I am not receiving any tuition waver :/
I am deeply sorry.

But you can be determined to improve your English here. We are happy to help you.
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It was so disappointing news for me.
Thanks for your encouragement, I will not stop trying.
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It was such disappointing news for me. (It was so disappointing to me.)
Thanks for your encouragement, (comma splice) I will not stop trying.
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ha ha .. and I will not stop learning Emotion: smile
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Mizanurha ha .. and I will not stop learning
I would accept It was so disappointing news for me.

It was so good a book that I'll never for get it.

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