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Debangkok Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Need help to correct these sentenses

Dear all,

Please help me correct this letter , the detail as below

I have sent e mail to apply a job then, the company e mail ask me about my expected salary.

How could I reply this e mail.

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Dear sir,

Thank you for your time that you took on my application, my expected salary is around bht 18000 and negociable.

I look forward to provide you my futher informaion.

Your faithfully,

kkkk
  

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Hi, Dear Sir, (where I live, we use the person's name if we know it, eg Dear Mr. Smith) Thank you for taking the time to consider my application. My expected salary is bht 18000, but it is negotiable.

— Clive

  • Hi, Dear Sir, (where I live, we use the person's name if we know it, eg Dear Mr.
  • Smith) Thank you for taking the time to consider my application.
  • My expected salary is bht 18000, but it is negotiable.
  • I look forward to providing you with any further information you may require.
  • ) kkkk Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,

Dear Sir, (where I live, we use the person's name if we know it, eg Dear Mr. Smith)

Thank you for taking the time to consider my application. My expected salary is bht 18000, but it is negotiable.

I look forward to providing you with any further information you may require.

Yours faithfully, (where I live, we normally say 'Yours sincerely'.
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Dear Clive, I would like to say many thanks for your kind help as usual. It's valuable comment. Best wish debangkok
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