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Chunkayng Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Need help to checking the Grammer
Anyaone can help check the converstation would be appreciated
Hi, may I speak to xxxxxxx?
This is Fannie from ABC. Are you convenient to talk for a moment?
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
We received your SMS regarding you have made the payment.
May I know which bank did you transfer to? Is it ABC Bank to ABC Bank?
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
What is the amount you transfer?
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
When did you do the transfer?
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Thank you so much for your information.
I will update our department and verify the payment for you. Have a nice day!
Hi, may I speak to xxxxxxx?
This is Fannie from ABC. Are you convenient to talk for a moment?
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
We received your SMS regarding you have made the payment.
May I know which bank did you transfer to? Is it ABC Bank to ABC Bank?
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
What is the amount you transfer?
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
When did you do the transfer?
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Thank you so much for your information.
I will update our department and verify the payment for you. Have a nice day!
Top answer
Hello, chungkayng-- and welcome to English Forums. H i. May I speak to xx?
- Hello, chungkayng-- and welcome to English Forums.
- H i.
- May I speak to xx?
- This is Fannie from ABC.
- Is it convenient to talk for a moment?
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Hello, chungkayng-- and welcome to English Forums.
Hi. May I speak to xx?
This is Fannie from ABC. Is it convenient to talk for a moment?
We received your SMS saying you've made the payment.
Which bank did you transfer it to? Was it ABC Bank to DEF Bank?
What is the amount you transferred?
Hi. May I speak to xx?
This is Fannie from ABC. Is it convenient to talk for a moment?
We received your SMS saying you've made the payment.
Which bank did you transfer it to? Was it ABC Bank to DEF Bank?
What is the amount you transferred?
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Thank you so much for the prompt reply. I have a question.
Why should i use "Is it convenient to talk for a moment?"
instead of "Are you convenient to talk for a moment"
Why should i use "Is it convenient to talk for a moment?"
instead of "Are you convenient to talk for a moment"
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Hi, May i know is there any mistake for below sentence?
Thank you so much for the information. I will update our department and verify the payment for you.
Thank you so much for the information. I will update our department and verify the payment for you.
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'Inconvenient' is not a quality of people; it is a quality of a situation.
Hi, could you tell me if there is any mistake in the sentence below?
Thank you so much for the information. I will advise our department and verify the payment for you.
Hi, could you tell me if there is any mistake in the sentence below?
Thank you so much for the information. I will advise our department and verify the payment for you.
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Hi, could anyone help to correct the grammer mistake in the conversation below?
Hi. May I speak to xxxx?
xxxxxxxxx
This is Fannie from ABC School. Is it convenient to talk for a moment?
XXXXX
Previously, you signed up private drawing lesson with ABC School. The first lesson is on 12Dec, Saturday 9.00am. May I know if you will attend this coming Saturday drawing lessons?
Hi. May I speak to xxxx?
xxxxxxxxx
This is Fannie from ABC School. Is it convenient to talk for a moment?
XXXXX
Previously, you signed up private drawing lesson with ABC School. The first lesson is on 12Dec, Saturday 9.00am. May I know if you will attend this coming Saturday drawing lessons?
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I have underlined some problem areas:
Hi. May I speak to xx?
xx
This is Fannie from ABC School. Is it convenient to talk for a moment?
XX
Previously, you signed up private drawing lesson with ABC School. The first lesson is on 12Dec, Saturday 9.00am. May I know if you will attend this coming Saturday drawing lessons?
XXXX
Hi. May I speak to xx?
xx
This is Fannie from ABC School. Is it convenient to talk for a moment?
XX
Previously, you signed up private drawing lesson with ABC School. The first lesson is on 12Dec, Saturday 9.00am. May I know if you will attend this coming Saturday drawing lessons?
XXXX
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Hi, thank you for indicating the errors to me. How about these?
Previously, you registered private drawing lesson with ABC School. The first lesson is on 12Dececmber, Saturday 9.00am. May I know if you will attend drawing lessons this coming Saturday?
May i know if you have made the payment to confirm your slot?
You may need to make the payment in advance to confirm you
Previously, you registered private drawing lesson with ABC School. The first lesson is on 12Dececmber, Saturday 9.00am. May I know if you will attend drawing lessons this coming Saturday?
May i know if you have made the payment to confirm your slot?
You may need to make the payment in advance to confirm you
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It is the underlined part that contains a problem:
you signed up private drawing lesson
You have instead changed to another word. Please address my concerns directly.
you signed up private drawing lesson
You have instead changed to another word. Please address my concerns directly.
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If "May i know" is broken language.
How do i ask politely on the phone?
How do i ask politely on the phone?
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