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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
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We are noted that, model no. xxx and xxx are stop to production, because it was no new order. But there still have 10pcs outstanding quantity not ship. We sugguest your compensation for USDxxx to fulfill the whole shipment/order.
  

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Hi, We are noted that, model no. *** and *** are stop to production, because it was no new order. But there still have 10pcs outstanding quantity not ship.

  • Hi, We are noted that, model no.
  • *** and *** are stop to production, because it was no new order.
  • But there still have 10pcs outstanding quantity not ship.
  • We sugguest your compensation for *** to fulfill the whole shipment/order.
  • Sorry, I can't understand your meaning.
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Hi,

We are noted that, model no. *** and *** are stop to production, because it was no new order. But there still have 10pcs outstanding quantity not ship. We sugguest your compensation for *** to fulfill the whole shipment/order.

Sorry, I can't understand your meaning. Perhaps you mean this:

Production of model no. **
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Hi Clive,

Is this better:

We have been noted that, the production of model *** and *** have stopped, because there was no new order. But there are still have 10pcs outstanding quantity for 1234 and 20pcs for 2345 have not been shipped. We suggest you compensation for these small quantity in order to fulfill our whole shipment.
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I wouldn't use a comma after "that", in your first sentence.
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Hi again,

We have been noted that, the production of model *** and *** have stopped, because there was no new order. But there are still have 10pcs outstanding quantity for 1234 and 20pcs for 2345 have not been shipped. We suggest you compensation for these small quantity in order to fulfill our whole shipment.

We have been notified that the produ

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