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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
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Need help revising this sentence
"My conclusion is that I often tried to magnify the time span of something that is already limited. For example, if my mom called at 3 p.m. to tell me to wash my cloth and that she will be back from work at 9 p.m., I would probably only start doing the chore at 8 p.m. and by the end just manages to slip by."
I know there there is a lot of grammar problem in that sentence so can somebody help me revise it?
I know there there is a lot of grammar problem in that sentence so can somebody help me revise it?
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Something like: I often extend the time span of something that is limited. For example, if my mom called at 3 pm to tell me to wash my clothes and that she would be back from work at 9 pm, I would probably start the chore only at 8 pm and barely finish in time .
- Something like: I often extend the time span of something that is limited.
- For example, if my mom called at 3 pm to tell me to wash my clothes and that she would be back from work at 9 pm, I would probably start the chore only at 8 pm and barely finish in time .
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Something like:
I often extend the time span of something that is limited. For example, if my mom called at 3 pm to tell me to wash my clothes and that she would be back from work at 9 pm, I would probably start the chore only at 8 pm and barely finish in time.
I often extend the time span of something that is limited. For example, if my mom called at 3 pm to tell me to wash my clothes and that she would be back from work at 9 pm, I would probably start the chore only at 8 pm and barely finish in time.
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