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Qiqinuinaifen128 Posted 17 years ago
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Can anyone help me check my Grammar mistake and enhance my sentence? Thanks

She elaborated that she sign up with us last year and we arrange John Quek to be her kid’s instructor, but due to her kids’ Chicken
Box, she stopped the lesson. Please call and ask her whether she make the payment to us last time.
  

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Hi, She elaborated that she sign up with us last year and we arrange John Quek to be her kid’s instructor, but due to her kids’ Chicken Box, she stopped the lesson. Please call and ask her whether she make the payment to us last time. She explained that she signed up with us last year and we arranged for John Quek to be her kid’s instructor.

  • Hi, She elaborated that she sign up with us last year and we arrange John Quek to be her kid’s instructor, but due to her kids’ Chicken Box, she stopped the lesson.
  • Please call and ask her whether she make the payment to us last time.
  • She explained that she signed up with us last year and we arranged for John Quek to be her kid’s instructor.
  • However, due to her kid's chicken p ox, she cancelled the lessons.
  • Please call and ask her whether she paid us last year.
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Hi,
She elaborated that she sign up with us last year and we arrange John Quek to be her kid’s instructor, but due to her kids’ Chicken
Box, she stopped the lesson. Please call and ask her whether she make the payment to us last time.

She explained that she signed up with us last year and we arranged for John Quek to be her kid’s instructor. However, due to her kid's chicken
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Good job. Clive. My English is really poor. I learn a lots. Thanks
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I have another sentence need someone to check.


It’s essential to save the student’s contact and details in the phone. The purpose is to help those who take the phone back after office hour to track whether it is a new client or existing client if there is a call.
Thank you in advance.

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