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0 this paper is supposed to be about a place that means america to me.. and in great detail im supposed to make the teacher feel like she is there when se reads it.. so can you guys help me im not very good at this. well here it is  thanks brandon02br02br00Coshocton County02br02br00Coshocton Ohio is truly an American scene, from the many attractions like Historic Roscoe Village, Monticello III Canal Boat, and Johnson-Humrickhouse Museum; to the everyday life of the people that live there. Coshocton County was established in 1811. The word Coshocton comes from an Indian word meaning "black bear town." It has grown from a small frontier and farming community to a modern agricultural city since it was established. It lies along the Muskingum, Walhonding, and Tuscarawas Rivers. There’s nothing like waking up to the sound of the birds chirping or the smell of the freshly cut grass. There’s not a lot to do in Coshocton but we always find something. It’s more of a claim place, with old people sitting on their porches watching cars drive by or just staring of into the sky. It seems like everyone walks a lot, some get an early start with the birds at the crack of dawn others by the moonlight. Farm land is everywhere you look, from corn and wheat, to ripe red tomatoes and white cotton. it has its nice green lawn bricks houses fancy  neighborhoods, and its not so nice brown dirt lawns and bet down houses. All in all it’s a great place to live; I wouldn’t want to live anywhere else. This is the place that I grew up, the place that I plan to stay. 0-

Mister Micawber · Accepted Answer

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01i00I don't know anything about Coshocton, Ohio, but I will fix your punctuation:02br
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00Coshocton01b00, 02b00Ohio01b00, 02b00is01b00 a truly02b00 American scene, from the many attractions like Historic Roscoe Village, Monticello III Canal Boat, and Johnson-Humrick01b00 House02b00 01b00Museum to02b00 the everyday life of the people that live there. Coshocton County was established in 1811. The word Coshocton comes from an Indian word meaning "black bear town01b00". 02b00It has grown from a small frontier and farming community to a modern agricultural city since it was established. It lies along the Muskingum, Walhonding, and Tuscarawas Rivers. 01b00There is 02b00nothing like waking up to the sound of the birds chirping or the smell of the freshly cut grass. 01b00There is02b00 not a lot to do in Coshocton01b00, 02b00but we always find something.01b00 It is02b00 more of a 01u00claim02u00 01b00(?)02b00 place, with old people sitting on their porches watching cars drive by or just staring 01b00off 02b00into the sky. It seems like everyone walks a lot01b00;02b00 some get an early start with the birds at the crack of dawn 01b00and others02b00 by the moonlight. Farm land is everywhere you look, from corn and01b00 wheat to02b00 ripe red tomatoes and white cotton.01b00 It02b00 has its nice green01b00 lawns, brick02b00 houses01b00, and02b00 fancy neighborhoods, 01b00but also02b00 its not so nice brown dirt lawns and 01b01del~~00bet02del~~00 broken?02b00 down houses. All in all01b00, it is02b00 a great place to live; I wouldn’t want to live anywhere else. This is the place that I grew 01b00up and02b00 the place that I plan to stay.02br
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Clarkie · Answer

0is this any better? thanks again 02br
00Coshocton, Ohio, is a truly American scene, from the many attractions like Historic Roscoe Village, Monticello III Canal Boat, and Johnson-Humrick House Museum to the everyday life of the people that live there. Coshocton County was established in 1811. The word Coshocton comes from an Indian word meaning "black bear town". It has grown from a small frontier and farming community to a modern agricultural city since it was established. It lies along the Muskingum, Walhonding, and Tuscarawas Rivers. There is nothing like waking up to the sound of the birds chirping or the smell of the freshly cut grass. There is not a lot to do in Coshocton, but we always find something. It is more of a calm place, with old people sitting on their porches rocking in there swings or chairs watching cars drive by, talking about the weather or just staring off into the sky. It seems like everyone walks a lot; some get an early start with the birds at the crack of dawn and others by the moonlight. Farm land is everywhere you look, from corn and wheat to ripe red tomatoes and white cotton. It has its nice green lawns, brick houses, and fancy neighborhoods, but also its not so nice brown dirt lawns and broken down houses. All in all, it is a great place to live; I wouldn't want to live anywhere else. This is the place that I grew up and the place that I plan to stay. 0-

Mister Micawber · Answer

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01i00Yes, but it needs to be divided into paragraphs so that the reader can see and follow the organization easier:02i02br
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00Coshocton, Ohio, is a truly American scene, from the many attractions like Historic Roscoe Village, Monticello III Canal Boat, and Johnson-Humrick House Museum to the everyday life of the people that live there.02br
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00Coshocton County was established in 1811. The word 01b00"02b00Coshocton01b00"02b00 comes from an Indian word meaning "black bear town". It has grown from a small frontier and farming community to a modern agricultural city since it was established. It lies along the Muskingum, Walhonding, and Tuscarawas Rivers.02br
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00There is nothing like waking up to the sound of the birds chirping or the smell of the freshly cut grass. There is not a lot to do in Coshocton, but we always find something. It is 01del~~00more of02del~~00 a calm place, with old people sitting on their porches rocking in there swings or chairs watching cars drive by, talking about the weather or just staring off into the sky. It seems like everyone walks a lot; some get an early start with the birds at the crack of dawn and others by the moonlight.02br
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00Farm land is everywhere you look, from corn and wheat to ripe red tomatoes and white cotton. It has its nice green lawns, brick houses, and fancy neighborhoods, but also its not so nice brown dirt lawns and broken down houses.02br
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00All in all, it is a great place to live; I wouldn't want to live anywhere else. This is the place that I grew up and the place that I plan to stay.0-

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