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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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0 I need some help revising my composition one college essay. I supposedly cannot seem to "write specifically", hopefully you guys can help.02br
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00The first, my religious persona started back as early as the age of ten. My parents, hardcore Christian believers, decided chuch every Sunday and study groups would help my moral values in life. I believe they were right in choosing so. I uphold the values Christianity has taught me. These values include the Ten Commandments and extremely effect my decisions regarding my peers. If my peers want a party then I will go assuming that the party doesn't contain drugs or excessive alcohol. The religious beliefs pounded into me as a kid impact all my decisions.02br
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0 01blockquote 01cite 10Anonymous12cite 10I need some help revising my composition one college essay. 12br 12br 10The first, my religious persona started back as early as the age of ten. My parents, hardcore Christian believers, decided chuch every Sunday and study groups would help my moral values in life.

  • 0 01blockquote 01cite 10Anonymous12cite 10I need some help revising my composition one college essay.
  • 12br 12br 10The first, my religious persona started back as early as the age of ten.
  • My parents, hardcore Christian believers, decided chuch every Sunday and study groups would help my moral values in life.
  • I believe they were right in choosing so.
  • I uphold the values Christianity has taught me.
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01cite10Anonymous12cite10I need some help revising my composition one college essay. I supposedly cannot seem to "write specifically", hopefully you guys can help.12br
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10Here is an exerpt from my essay...12br
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10The first, my religious persona started back as early as the age of ten. My pa

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