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Hi teachers.Would you correct me this paragraph please?The other class we talked about emotional intelligence and how that is directly related with your success and then I asked you these couple of questions ...Thanks in advance

Clive · Accepted Answer

Hi,

Would you correct me this paragraph please?

The other class we talked about emotional intelligence and how that is directly related with your success and then I asked you these couple of questions ...

Would you correct me this paragraph please?

In the other class we talked about emotional intelligence and how that is directly related to your success, and then I asked you these few questions ...

Clive

Tenacious Learner · Answer

Hi Clive,

Thanks a lot once again. I didn't do it that bad this time, did I?

Rai Tangpuz · Answer

If you're the one saying those lines and was participating in that 'other class'

In the other class we talked about emotional intelligence and how it is directly related to your success and then I asked them a couple of questions ...

OR

In the other class we talked about emotional intelligence and how it is directly related to your success and then I asked them these questions ...

OR

In the other class we talked about emotional intelligence and how it is directly related to our success and then I asked them these questions ...

OR

In the other class we talked about emotional intelligence and how it is directly related to one's success and then I asked them these questions ...

If you're not a participant of that 'other class' OR that 'other class' is handled by another teacher but you know what they discussed in that classthen it should be:

The other class talked about emotional intelligence and how it directly relates to one's success. The students (of that class) were asked these questions ...

You can form different sentences depending on what you want to express of wht the scenario is

Tenacious Learner · Answer

Thank you for all your detailed replies Rai Tangpuz.

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