One time, I felt deeply understood when my sister turned off the light for me because I fell asleep. I'm not the type of person who falls asleep easily. sometimes, when i went to bed before my sister did, I wanted the lights to be turned off but she wouldn't. I couldn't sleep. Last night, she turned off the light for me when I went to bed. And I was appreciated.
Leave "One time, I felt deeply understood was when....." as it is, my teacher said that this "....my sister turned off the light for me because i fell asleep." is a fragment, but i don't know how to correct it. there's one more sentence fragment in this writing, i believe it's "sometimes, when i went to the bed before......." can anyone help me correct it? and other grammar errors if possible............thanks!!
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