Need help on Argumentative essay

0Hi! I am currently learning how to write an argumentative essay.This is my first one. I hope you can give me some comment on how to improve this essay. I need your guidence and help. Please correct me if i made any mistake. How can i write a convincing essay? What tone should i use? How should i start and how should i end? I hope you can help me. Thank you so much! I will continue to work hard to improve! Thank you so much!02br
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01b01u00“I would much rather be an only child than have six brothers and sisters.” How far do you agree with this view?02u02b02br
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00Many people would prefer to be the only child in their family. Unsurprisingly, the enjoy being the only one to be showered with love from their parents. Personally, I would love to have six brothers and sisters.02br
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00By taking care of your brothers and sisters will instill, as well as, develop a sense of responsibility in you. Having a good sense of responsibility makes you a better person. It allows you to be independent and self-reliant. To be in this family, it will then be my responsibility to take care of my brothers and sisters. Consequently, I will develop a sense of responsibility and learn to be a dependable person.02br
00Many a times, people feel lonely and wished for accompaniment. Your brothers and sisters will then be the most suitable accompaniment you seek for. Whenever you feel blue or alone, they can console you and even cheer you up. I will have that as a privilege if I have six brothers and sisters. Therefore, I feel that it is god’s gift to have six brothers and sisters as a part of my family.02br
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00While it is true that having six brothers and sisters would mean sharing your things with them. It is also true that it can make you a better person because by learning to share, you can become a generous person, possessing a giving character. This is what having six brothers and sisters as a family can give you.02br
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00Many people have argued about the advantages of being the only child. However, what I have to say is that, it is really fortunate to have six brothers and sisters. They are not only considered as a part of the family, they are also teachers who can teach you a valuable lesson of life. They teach you how to become a happy person, a person with great character. I believe that this is what makes a family of six brothers and sisters so special.02br
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