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Grammar

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That orge is very ugly.
Laughter and crying are typical human responses.
Gaity is part of Paris' great charm.
  

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" 3) personally I wouldn't use gaity in this old-fashioned way any more, it has really shifted to denote homosexuality for most readers, so I'd choose another word there, or re-phrase totally.

  • " 3) personally I wouldn't use gaity in this old-fashioned way any more, it has really shifted to denote homosexuality for most readers, so I'd choose another word there, or re-phrase totally.
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1) spelling of OGRE is wrong

2) better to use a pairing in the same grammatical form:
"Laughter and tears..."
or "Laughing and crying......"

3) personally I wouldn't use gaity in this old-fashioned way any more, it has really shifted to denote homosexuality for most readers, so I'd choose another word there, or re-phrase totally.

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