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Tenacious Learner Posted 15 years ago
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Need help. Is this paragraph correct?
Hi teachers,
I would apprecriate your help in correcting this paragraph.
You must remember that Fred Collins lost his job after he ran into a police car, so he had to look for another job. Now he works in the construction sector. He has never worked in it before; therefore he is a labourer. He has to work hard, harder that an excavation driver for example. But he earns less money than an excavation driver. In fact, Fred has the worst job. He works the hardest, but earns the least at work.
I would apprecriate your help in correcting this paragraph.
You must remember that Fred Collins lost his job after he ran into a police car, so he had to look for another job. Now he works in the construction sector. He has never worked in it before; therefore he is a labourer. He has to work hard, harder that an excavation driver for example. But he earns less money than an excavation driver. In fact, Fred has the worst job. He works the hardest, but earns the least at work.
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Hi, I would apprecriate your help in correcting this paragraph. I'll also make it xound natural. Y ou must remember that Fred Collins lost his job after he ran into a police car, so he had to look for another one.
- Hi, I would apprecriate your help in correcting this paragraph.
- I'll also make it xound natural.
- Y ou must remember that Fred Collins lost his job after he ran into a police car, so he had to look for another one.
- Now he works in the construction sector.
- He has never done that kind of work before, so he is a labourer.
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Hi,
I would apprecriate your help in correcting this paragraph. I'll also make it xound natural.
You must remember that Fred Collins lost his job after he ran into a police car, so he had to look for another one. Now he works in the construction sector. He has never
I would apprecriate your help in correcting this paragraph. I'll also make it xound natural.
You must remember that Fred Collins lost his job after he ran into a police car, so he had to look for another one. Now he works in the construction sector. He has never
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Thank you so much for your help, effort, and time Clive. [Y]
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