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Chunkayng Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Need help in Grammer and Sentences Structure
Hi, could anyone help to correct my mistake will be appreciated.
Situation: Swimming class is confirmed starting this coming weekend. Coordinator requires reminding the parent for the lesson. At the same time, coordinator needs to check with the parent if they have the floatboard and goggle.
Hi. This is Fannie from xxxxx. Is it convenient to talk for a moment?
xxxxxxxx
I would like to inform you that the swimming class is confirmed this Saturday at 5pm.
On the first lesson, our team will be there to facilitate. We will be meeting you inside of the swimming complex, near the entrance. Your child may need to bring the swimming goggle, floatboard and swimwear.
May I know do you have swimming goggle and float board? We can get from our direct supplier at 10 dollars per piece. Usually the price is 15 dollars. Would you like to get one?
xxxxxxx
Float board comes in a yellow layer; the colours are pink, red, blue, green and dark brown.
I would like to confirm your item purchased: The colour of the goggle is red and the floatboard is blue. We will pass the purchased items to you on the first lesson.
xxxxxx
For the payment, you may need to make the payment through internet banking or ATM transferred to our company account. Kindly update us once you done the transfer. Thank you so much. Have a nice day and see you this weekend.
Situation: Swimming class is confirmed starting this coming weekend. Coordinator requires reminding the parent for the lesson. At the same time, coordinator needs to check with the parent if they have the floatboard and goggle.
Hi. This is Fannie from xxxxx. Is it convenient to talk for a moment?
xxxxxxxx
I would like to inform you that the swimming class is confirmed this Saturday at 5pm.
On the first lesson, our team will be there to facilitate. We will be meeting you inside of the swimming complex, near the entrance. Your child may need to bring the swimming goggle, floatboard and swimwear.
May I know do you have swimming goggle and float board? We can get from our direct supplier at 10 dollars per piece. Usually the price is 15 dollars. Would you like to get one?
xxxxxxx
Float board comes in a yellow layer; the colours are pink, red, blue, green and dark brown.
I would like to confirm your item purchased: The colour of the goggle is red and the floatboard is blue. We will pass the purchased items to you on the first lesson.
xxxxxx
For the payment, you may need to make the payment through internet banking or ATM transferred to our company account. Kindly update us once you done the transfer. Thank you so much. Have a nice day and see you this weekend.
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I have underlined some problem areas: Situation: Swimming class is confirmed starting this coming weekend. Coordinator requires reminding the parent fo r the lesson. At the same tim e, coor dinator needs to check with the parent if they have the floatboard and goggle .
- I have underlined some problem areas: Situation: Swimming class is confirmed starting this coming weekend.
- Coordinator requires reminding the parent fo r the lesson.
- At the same tim e, coor dinator needs to check with the parent if they have the floatboard and goggle .
- Hi.
- This is Fannie from xx.
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I have underlined some problem areas:
Situation: Swimming class is confirmed starting this coming weekend. Coordinator requires reminding the parent for the lesson. At the same time, coordinator needs to check with the parent if they have the floatboard and goggle.
Hi. This is Fannie from xx. Is it convenient to talk for a moment?
xx
Situation: Swimming class is confirmed starting this coming weekend. Coordinator requires reminding the parent for the lesson. At the same time, coordinator needs to check with the parent if they have the floatboard and goggle.
Hi. This is Fannie from xx. Is it convenient to talk for a moment?
xx
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Hi, thank you for your help. I have amended it. Please help me check if there are any mistakes.
Situation: Swimming class is confirmed starting this coming weekend. Coordinator requires to remind the parent to attend the lesson. At the same time, coordinator needs to check with the parent if they have floatboard and goggles.
I would like to inform you that the swimming class is
Situation: Swimming class is confirmed starting this coming weekend. Coordinator requires to remind the parent to attend the lesson. At the same time, coordinator needs to check with the parent if they have floatboard and goggles.
I would like to inform you that the swimming class is
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Situation: Swimming class is confirmed starting this coming weekend. Coordinator must remind the parent to attend the lesson. At the same time, coordinator needs to check with the parent if they have floatboard and goggles.
I would like to inform you that the swimming class is confirmed starting at 5 pm on this Saturday.
For the first lesson, our team will be the
I would like to inform you that the swimming class is confirmed starting at 5 pm on this Saturday.
For the first lesson, our team will be the
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The floatboard comes in yellow layer ???; the colours are pink, red, blue, green and dark brown.
Actually i would i to express to the customer that the all the floatboards have two layers which are yellow and pink, yellow and blue, yellow and green, yellow and dark brown. How should i phase this sentence?
Actually i would i to express to the customer that the all the floatboards have two layers which are yellow and pink, yellow and blue, yellow and green, yellow and dark brown. How should i phase this sentence?
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You should phrase it that way: ' the floatboards have two layers which are yellow and pink, yellow and blue, yellow and green, yellow and dark brown.'
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