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Araselvan Posted 11 years ago
Grammar
Need help in correcting my daughter's story...
Please help me correcting the following story.
Lilly woke up to the sunshine pouring out her bedroom window and her black alarm colck that now read 8:00 a.m..
Thanks.
Lilly woke up to the sunshine pouring out her bedroom window and her black alarm colck that now read 8:00 a.m..
Thanks.
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Other than the typo, I would change "pouring out" to "pouring in" (because the sun is not inside the room with Lilly). Also, you only need one period on the end of a sentence. m.
- Other than the typo, I would change "pouring out" to "pouring in" (because the sun is not inside the room with Lilly).
- Also, you only need one period on the end of a sentence.
- m.
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Other than the typo, I would change "pouring out" to "pouring in" (because the sun is not inside the room with Lilly). Also, you only need one period on the end of a sentence. SO:
Lilly woke up to sunshine pouring in her bedroom window and to her black alarm clock that now read 8:30 a.m.
Lilly woke up to sunshine pouring in her bedroom window and to her black alarm clock that now read 8:30 a.m.
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